
Scuffling, sobbing you come to the world,
Generation, you bless our dearest kind,
Proud mother love to croon,
Oh! My dear,
Your great journey will begin soon,
Sleepless nights and nervous days,
Reminds me of growing age,
Waiting for you to crawl and stand,
Sweat me hard till the end,
While Singing a song or a fairy tale,
Never makes me feel faint or pale,
Your most alluring smile,
Which bring pleasure to my mind,
Mearly make me feel like dance in style.
Halt to go outside, leaving you alone,
As your thought remind me like a ringer tone,
Counting the days one by one,
Pray to god, that you should get the courage & strength like everyone.
Never let us parents down,
You are the most precious gift,which we have ever found,
Light the world like a shining star,
The proudest moment ever to prosper,
When days are numbered and death bell rings,
You are the man!
who will catch our bodies on fire,
The greatest thing which we could ever desire.
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Thanks DR Bogdan,Rishika,bustling for liking the poem,looking forward your valuable feedback and inputs as well..
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Thanks all my friends for pouring in on with your lovely comments.We have just begun with Friday!!
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Lovely tribute to your new born son! ๐
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So solemn with your genuinity bro
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Your welcome bro
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Beautiful!! Now I understand what my father meant when he said โI was smiling like a fool when the doctor handed you to me for the first timeโ.
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Yes dear, our dad is our hero and our mom is our god
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Amazing poem Sir…
Your choice of words is awesome Sir.
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That’s started I am moving now to next one
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Okay sir….Best wishes for the next one
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Next one is already published รvil Superstar Corona Stay away” let me know your opinion..
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Okay sir…
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Thanks much
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Bhattraps has published its first GAZAL of the moth so musical feast has begun,plse give your valuable feedback,inputs..
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Thanks my all lovely friends for your valuable feedback on poem.I am really honoured and overwhelmed.Looking forward for more..
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I feel
that
the parents
should
never
let
the child
down!
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Yes agreed and it should be vice versa I believe
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Takes me back to my children when they were small. Well Done. ๐โจ๐ซ
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Truely encouraged by your words
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My new Poem “Evilstar Corona stay at bay”
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Very moving.
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Truely inspired by your words,have a nice day
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Truely appreciated your words.have a great dazzlingFriday..
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Was a good one.
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Thanks ๐
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A GAZAL to start with super charger Saturday..
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Your son will be proud to read this when he grows up.
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thanks for your true inspiration,much apprecaited..
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Infact he is already trying,but bit too early to accept..
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This was one beautiful poetry. Nice work
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Thanks a lot much apprecaited..
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Just come out of emotions
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I really loved it. It reminded me of my parents love and support which they always give๐๐
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as always they are great..
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๐๐
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Give your feedback on my new poem” Evil Superstar corona go away”
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This is amazing
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Surelyits real life very close to heart buddy..
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Beautifully written! Enjoyed reading it!
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Thanks
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